Ooh, nice. Really sparsely, effectively written, which i love, especially for something as bleak as post-J-Day. The idea of Derek making it to fight through the same war a second time is fucking cool as hell, and oddly i hadn't considered it before.
You don't stop Judgment Day.
YES. Which has always been Sarah's weakness, i think, trying so doggedly to prevent it when it can't be prevented. All they've managed to do is fuck up the future EVEN MORE.
Both alive, both healthy, except the older one, Derek, had taken shrapnel to the ankle a few months back.
Nodding, Derek shifted his weight only slightly to his left foot.
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Date: 2009-04-16 05:10 am (UTC)You don't stop Judgment Day.
YES. Which has always been Sarah's weakness, i think, trying so doggedly to prevent it when it can't be prevented. All they've managed to do is fuck up the future EVEN MORE.
Both alive, both healthy, except the older one, Derek, had taken shrapnel to the ankle a few months back.
Nodding, Derek shifted his weight only slightly to his left foot.
A++ I loved that bit. OH, TIME TRAVEL.
Hell, take my name. Please.
OH, JOHN.